Siam Ocean World
Siam
Ocean World
The biggest
aquarium in Bangkok, and the third biggest aquarium over all of the east-Asia.That place I can see many people homogeneous are walks in
with their families; they are looks all happy to be here. When I get inside
there, I can smell the people sweat smell and also the little perfume small of
that place to make people feels comfortable and relax to be there. At that
place I can hear the sound of peoples that exciting to see fishes, sharks, and
many more sea creatures that swimming inside the tanks, especially the kids
that shout at that place so loud, because of their excitement. There also has a
tank of salty water which have disparity sea creatures in the tank, such as starfish,
small fishes, coral, & little sharks, they all nuance animals that are not harm to
people, when I touch on starfish, I can feel it’s rough skin, and on the part
that it use to stick on wall, I feel the little slippery there. That place is
very dark and had narrow white or pink and violet neon lights, to make people
who wearing white t-shirt to have a tantamount growing purple color. There also have a
place for heterogeneous types of animals as well, like there had a beavers tank as
well, I can smell the salty fish smell that’s its food, and also their product
wastes smell a little. And there also had a zone of fish that living in natural
water such as river, but I saw all of them are so big that some of ocean’s
animals, there also had a giant cat fish, giant ray fish, and many more fish
that made me surprised by their sizes. And there also have a shows, like have a
scuba diver diving in a big tank, and he’s feeding a fish, and he also can talk
to us by microphone, he have it one the diving suit so we can talk to him. And
there highlight spot was the tunnel that we can see fish swimming around this
tunnel for 360 degrees, we will feel that we are underwater as well, this place
was amazing!
(1st Picture) http://www.mxphone.net/3569-True-Experience-of-Sleep-Over-at-Siam-Ocean-World-3/
(2nd Picture) http://tinyzone.tv/TravelDetail.aspx?ctpostid=1003
(1st Picture) http://www.mxphone.net/3569-True-Experience-of-Sleep-Over-at-Siam-Ocean-World-3/
(2nd Picture) http://tinyzone.tv/TravelDetail.aspx?ctpostid=1003
Labels: English II
posted by Unknown @ 2:36 AM
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Nice!! Your writing is making me feel that i'm actually there, with the easy choice of the descriptive words it makes the story and what you want to convey to us even easier to understand, eventhough there may be little gramatical errors. If you could revise it more, you could actually advertise of the Siam Ocean World. Anyways it's good, keep it up!
-Tawin Kunattanond p8
Wow! Your writing was so realistic so I could feel how the SIAM OCEAN WORLD would look like. I've never been there but after I read this, I wanted to go visit there. I want to see the giant cat fish. I wondered how it would look like. But one thing, I think there are some grammar mistakes. If you check it once more and fix a some mistakes, your writing will be the best advertisement of SIAM OCEAN WORLD !!! GOod JoB(: -Doyoun Kim
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